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Insanity

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Overburdened by the past
Memories that wake far too fast
Too easily taken over by hate
Consumed by fear - I cannot awake
Blind me of the world's violence
Let the truth be held in silence
I want to start over new
Insanity, I welcome you
I like the theme of this poem because, i like to think of if it is better to know everything or nothing at all. Some people quickly say everything but if you think about it, it wouldn't be too great...
Ignorance truly is bliss...
I know this poem isn't the best example of that but hope you like it ^^
Anyways I'm curious what you guys think about this one.
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How does it flow?
A line that does fit, or something I might want to add?
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