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Where Rhythm and Rhyme Collide
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With so much left unsaid
Here I stand, lost...undead
Your lies were without cost
Without a care for what I lost
Left only with my hate
Blackening my wishful fate
My time is gone, and so are you
If only I knew forever wasn't true
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Overburdened by the past
Memories that wake far too fast
Too easily taken over by hate
Consumed by fear - I cannot awake
Blind me of the world's violence
Let the truth be held in silence
I want to start over new
Insanity, I welcome you
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Help Me
Help Me Escape
Help Me Get Away
Away from the familiar same
Every day, again and again
Burn My Dread
Watch it die and leave it dead
Nothingness I have become
Too much, It's over, I'm done
Something I must befriend
Failure, over and over, again and again
Help Me Get Away
Help Me Find A Way
Hopeful, before it's too late...
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Velvet Lies
As velvet love pours from my betrayed heart
The lines begin to blur; I fall apart
Every last word reeks of lies
Substance renders apparitional ties
Craving release, self-affliction I endure
Endless pain time cannot cure
I must let go, to get it together
But no matter what, I'm stained forever
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A laugh here, a laugh there
A masked truth, nothing's there
Surrounded by people
And yet I'm all alone
Around me so many places
But none to call my own
Solace is all that I ask
But that too, an unachievable task
And what can I do, but just give in
I've lost, but somehow I just keep on living
More Poems: Help Me
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As I Silently Sit Here
As I silently sit here
I wonder when's the next time I'm going to see her
Reflecting on the experiences of the past
Hoping this pain will not last
Monstrosities plague my mind
I doubt her again, another time
But when we talk, it all goes away
A temporary sedative for all that hate
I want her again, I'm no longer afraid
No matter how long, I will always wait
And for her, I sit here silently
Wondering when she'll find me
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Your Beautiful Smile
Your smile lights up my very soul
And ignites what has gone out far too long ago
Your eyes blaze with the sun
Your beauty is unique, unlike anyone
You're too cute to just look at
For full effect, stare and never look back
Time is precious, when it's spent with you
You give me something to cherish and look forward to
Perhaps you already knew
But I really like you
So smile for me, you know it's true
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Within this place, as you lie awake
You begin to realize your mistake
Darkness surrounds you, you are not alone
Everything you thought is now unknown
Your fears come to life, denying you sleep
Sanity becomes almost too hard to keep
But you hold on, it subsides
You're just happy you're alive
Another night, another day
Hope for tomorrow it will go away
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My Infection
My Infection
The pain inside me is like an infection
Killing me with cancerous intentions
Numbing feelings that pass
Burning through a heart I once had
'Til there's nothing left inside
My body's to run cold, deprived
And now I'm lost, dead
Listening to the voices inside my head
More Poems: Nothing Left
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Nothing Left
Nothing Left
With my heart given no reason to function
My body is but a shell left with nothing
And my mind's slowly going insane
Can't focus on anything but the pain
As tears fall from my eyes
A little more I die
Gaps form in my life
All I knew wasn't right
Realizing the truths and lies
To Myself
And to all I had confide
More Poems: In Pieces
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In Pieces
In Pieces
I sit here bleeding inside
Cut clean and thrown aside
I want to tear my heart out
Empty of what I couldn't live without
Afflicting pain consumes me
No feelings left within me
Sleepless, waiting for an end
Time goes, again and again
I hear voices from behind
Laughing as I wait, confined
Then I'm thrown into the abyss
But too soon I reminisce
My torment will continue
But my time is up
Relieved of all I had once loved
:iconshallow-abyss:Shallow-Abyss 4 4

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The first moment we locked eyes
I was hypnotized
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I can't hide it anymore
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From the first moment we locked eyes
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Numb was an interesting place
Out of the race
Watching things with bored intent
Not caring about any event
Seeing things through cold dead eyes
Not falling down, but failing to rise
Explaining myself to my reflection
But missing nuance and inflection
Logical to a very fault
Everything else seemed to halt
Emotion led to weakness and disdain
Nothing there to really gain
Yet insight was granted still
And I regained my strength of will
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Sinking, sunk
Into the darkness of the pillow
Of emotions comforting nothing to the touch
Every nerve prick hurts to much
Its falling, the sky, upon a down cast head
The rain cloud travel over a bed
cold and uninviting, with a soulless girl
Spirits crushed beneath the waste that's hurled
Spiraling, the kind that makes the eyes dilate
Smiling, the kind that's fueled by hate
Do you like it? The feeling it makes you feel?
Its horrible, isn't it? Lips taste like steel
Sinking, sunk, that ship has sailed
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Hey I'm trying to start writing again. I recently came back here and started reminiscing on my old works and found myself wishing I could do it all again. My excuse has been the schoolwork I've had, which has been rather daunting, but I've still had time for other things so I'll make time for this. I have completely abandoned my group, of which I have to thank :iconpheonixcrucifix: for accepting deviants artworks for a rather extended amount of time. Thank you ^^. I'm going to start by fixing up some of my more rough and incomplete works and then see what new material I can come up with after that. It won't be the same as my older material.

Well anyways I doubt anyone actually reads these things but I had to get it out anyways. If you are reading, thank you for your time and have a nice day. ^^ Also what are your goals for the new year?
  • Listening to: Chasing Cars - Snow Patrol
  • Reading: The Greatest Show On Earth - Richard Dawkins


Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
My name is Nathan And I live in Canada. I love to write poetry and enjoy playing video games. Music is my life, and I listen to just about everything. I am very opinionated and like to debate and take sides of often unpopular point of views.

Current Residence: Canada
deviantWEAR sizing preference: S
Favourite genre of music: The various subtypes of Metal particularly symphonic metal and metalcore but I listen to everything from Rock to Pop to Electronic to Classical music
Favourite style of art: Anime, Gothic, Abstract
Operating System: Mac OS X Lion
MP3 player of choice: iPod Touch
Personal Quote: "To be one's self, and unafraid whether right or wrong, is more admirable than the easy cowardice of surrender to conformity"


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Hello! Thank you for joining my group :iconwords-to-the-world:! I was hoping that with your permission, I could add some of your writing to the featured section of my group.
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